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uh matthew
can u please make sure everyone hands up their final wr next week
uh
we need to shoot for this
we need to shoot for this
so what does this mean
some of you the main problem is that you know this year
we have alot of issues with linkages
because this year's topic is alittle more complicated
because we need to have forward and backward things
past conservation current situation abit more analysis abit more fufilling there
so nwo we going to go throuh this
now chapters project work 2009
wat s the problem with chapters 1 and 2
now there is just too much description
alot of you find comfort ind oin things
especially the sitaution in singapore
and your current situation aas well as your past emegency or consrvation
allooott of description
now let me tell you this
your desription of your passt
as well as your current mergency
i only want one pararaph
the restmust be some level of analysis
if you tell me in the 1950s ro smething what happened
give me a timeline
its a way to cut words and very eas to mark
which makes the marker happy
point form comes through
give me a picture
give me a situation
out of thi situatoin there are five points
zip
there are five points
generally tou have to make sure there is anayslis
what is the tisutaiotn here
parlalels drawn
where are the gaps
theat is the analysis already
how many of you know what the timeline looks like in a time magazine
ok
now
theres twoo much copyinng and pasting
i dont get the sense that youre immersed in this pw
are you immersed?
oh really
the sex group
are you immersed in it
this class is really *******
so just let me cut the pain alright
you fail to relate your case studies to your propsals
your parallels are not drawn properly
its all your pi eom nonsense
raising publicity through celebrity
visiblity
what else?
the other one is creating publicity
raising awareness
role simulation
immersion
role playing
what kind of principles can you all come out with
but i dont get the sense that you guys are using your vocablulary to come up with this
its so easy
if you boil it down to the project
you can complete it in one week
its so easy
its just how your interpret
your minitrials are pea-seized
why is this a suitable case study
in this case its because u didnt analyze it
you cut and pase
why is this suitable?
must link this to your emergency
all your gaps
as long as you have all your gaps
you can address your curren gap issues?
point 1 2 3 4 5
thats all
this your chapter 1
your chapter 1 will e introduction
your chapter must have a quote
chapter 1 u start wit a quote
now ths will be a ncie opening
a quote
now let me show you
wang xun's hgroup
the sex group
the quote
trying to scriblle alot of things in there
you see
you cannot have sex education without saying that sex is natural and that most people find it pleasurable
so they are targetting at the tell it as it is thing
but they forget what their propsal is about
they donte ven talk about their introduction
the sex education tlel them that it i pleasurable
it is
it is ok
just INDULGE IN IT ALL RIGHT
now do you see what it means
it is a nice quote
but it does not capture the essence of your entire propsal
after that
its as if this guy popped out of nowhere!
just quote
dont care
blanks
fill in the blanks
and all of a sudden there is no link
there is no link from introductio to jstufication of topic!
so sex
people are doing it
sex education
what are you trying to say
do you see what i mean that detachment
that you are not into it
because you dont see the linkages
and you fail to see the coherence
just like a dunno wad person talkig about sex
romeo romeo
can you exactly tell me how you rephrase this
what kind of quotes would you have found
"something about sex"
its okay
over
ok i'll come to you
ok so see that tne national courtesy campaign
so can you asee
all these in sinde
all the quote
link
introdcution
the broad sweeps of your project
this will be number 1
1.1 justification
what you all have
justification isit
justifcation of topic
so basically the current situation in singapore
something like that
then it will be problems identified
and then your project aims
correct?
something like that?
right
lets move on
now the most problematic one would be your hapters 3 and 4
now your chapter 2
for this clas you have ane xtra chapter the theoretical framework
must describe it comprehnseively and give structure
from this hteorical framework youa dapt
you cannot take wholesale the model and say ok we take this model and come up with this concept and all
venn diagram
you have to simplfy it
to edit your proplsa
i want that
because that will be instant generation of idea marks for you
ecause it shows adaptation
because its comprehsenive and its dateailde and why it covers lal this
you have evaluation and analysis already
i give you an idea
how you going to write you rproplsal chapter
your theoritcal framwork says this we got 3 pronged approach
songs and music that appeals to listerns for example
right
and then it says here that
as part of your propsal
can you see it
as part of your propsal blearg
now as part of your propsal
you are just to describ
description one para
can you see it?
one para
then
you going to go into your song
oh blahblhablah
but
you have what
subtatiantion
from therapist and pyshciatrsits
why song lend itself to foot odour sufferes
you reserach
what does it say for example
so para for para i give you a breakdown
but u dont cut and paste the whole thing
so your screen will be like this
screenshots
annotations
what doess this videocip show
then you can say we did this as a trial
but the tiral evaluation
and eveyryone just listen to the song
visuall its not conencted
because m ost of us are visual learners
trhough the whole education system we are in
so even if your tiral flop
say that we probably need to put in some things
then you suggest solutoins
for example you want to take episodes of this from discovery channel and all that
you have these screenshots
make into ac d
a video clip
blahblhablah
gimme still shots of ur ivdeo clip
showing wad
again
you might wan to trial your videoclip
and say what improvements might yield
acocrding to thefeedback
chatper 5 or 6 is themost important chapter
it ends up with the last impression given
now the last conclusion is the hardest to write
it is a meta-congnitve type of chapter
very much like a gp essay conclusionn
stand back and look at the whole big picture
huh
desheng: conclusoin
a fighting finish
wad ur gp teacher say about conclusion
what must you write?
what is meta-cognitive
when you stand back
which one of your propsals was the best fit
for your example
for your situation and why
so last part thers an evluation
second para you do extension
because of this
you weigh
which is your best fit
and why
because of the cirustmacnes of singapore
and globalization
why
you have to contextualize it
why
bceause of local proccess
because of locak education system
thats why
thats why u best fit in
you got to have extension
for self esteem people
there may be situatoin
that can actually fit into other mental disorders
so you ahve exension
do not just s different conext or different issue or different target audience
extension of target group
or u change target audience
or u change context
for example
from mental disorders to dunno wad
all right
number 3
would be
uh
propsing
certain directions
which your propsals can take
for example certain loopholes
or certaint hings you would not be able to do in your project
but would complement
complement analysis of toher suject
complement this
further exploration
for example you feel that
self-esteem and body mutilation is an emerging trend
which your group has foudn out
and that is an important tool of exploration
leetting others explore this idea for them
meta cognition
or perhaps
you want to talk about major loopholes
which on hindsight
you could have plugged
this will be subsumed under best fit
best fit why
bettter keep it short
you understand and acknolegde that there are some major gaps
in this
in ths whole project
not just individaul propsals
the whole project
what is that missing link there
so you tink of it
not just individaul propsals
you do your evaluation
you want to talk about that
so i want to talk to you about that last chapter
is that fine
i have with me
some samples of wr and op
you can copy some of their presentation and coherence passages
if you want
tand the oral rpesentation for some of them
just keep it within the class
i dont haeve the persmission to circulate
i have everything in soft copy
whatever readsings that the counsellors have provided
i have here
copy into sombeoyd's laptop that you have
rip it off
and exhcange

what pow said unedited with over 9000 typos

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